I like the message of this song, the beat is also nice. The way you started the song was catchy, I kind of wish that was apart of the main chorus the entire time even tho I like what you said in the main chorus. I was happy you added it to the ending but wish it was consistently with the main chorus because its really catchy but its a dope song I like the cadence switch ups too. Thank you for sharing your art with us
Nice chill vibe. Dope song. And I 100% agree with Moodswingz about trying to rework that first part's melody into the hook. People love melodies.
I like the message of this song, the beat is also nice. The way you started the song was catchy, I kind of wish that was apart of the main chorus the entire time even tho I like what you said in the main chorus. I was happy you added it to the ending but wish it was consistently with the main chorus because its really catchy but its a dope song I like the cadence switch ups too. Thank you for sharing your art with us